KAZUKE KUROGANE Redraw

Ok Right! Here it is Kazuke's redrawing ... This is more faithful to the initial green sketch I did.... like some advisers advise me to do.... so here you go.... I think I am getting close to the art style I want for the manga ... well since this is an action title I decided to add some serious tone to the basic style coupled with some HIGH CONTRAST that I need to make the pages more interesting and feel deep to look at .... so i hope things will get even better ^_^ i really like stylized drawings ... and I colored it and have included the name of the manga's author XELLOS16....I am open to suggestions about the color scheme